Everything turned into nothing
Once there was a girl,
So beautiful and pure,
Was working in a bar,
The age I wasn’t sure.
She definitely caught my eye,
She smiled over the shoulder,
That took me to the moon,
Everything else was over.
So I walk in her direction,
Without knowing what to say,
So I told her my name,
And ask about her day.
She said was a bit busy,
Because she was just starting,
She ask me to stay for a bit,
I couldn’t believe what was happening.
Such a beautiful girl.
Literally talking to me.
I didn’t want to screw up.
So had to wait and see.
The conversation flow,
For the rest of day,
Then I say goodbye,
And just made my way.
I was so excited,
how in love could I be?
I just talked to an Angel,
And the Angel talked to me.
Went back the next day,
Hoping that I could see her,
My heart was pumping out,
And I was a true believer.
I believed in the destiny,
And that she was the one.
I had to be careful,
And with time could be done.
I was going to do my best,
And prove that I was the right,
Will always be there for her,
No matter if is day or night.
And for a time was only that,
Meeting in the bar just for a while,
Then we went for walks in the park,
And the feelings just turn wild.
Every day I was more in love,
She was an amazing person,
But I didn’t know if was real,
Or just a simple diversion.
My friends try to talk me over,
And said that was no chance,
That she will never choose a kid,
It will never be a romance.
But I thought was real,
So I left them behind,
Stopped going with them,
And only her in my mind.
Then the day finally came,
To tell her how I feel.
With my heart said “I love you”
And that was real.
But the worst moment happened,
And I could see a tear,
She said she did believe it,
That i was being sincere.
But I was too young,
And another person had show up.
That she cared about me,
But was time to give up.
My heart was broken,
The floor just disappeared,
I only could cry,
And nothing was cleared.
So I had to accept,
Just let her live her life,
Always with the hope,
That one day she will be my wife.
About this poem
This is the first love story coverted in poetry.
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Written on March 20, 2023
Submitted by pedrob.47934 on March 20, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABXB CDXD EFGF HIJI AHKH XFCF LHMH FDXD HEME XNDN XXXX XEOE DPLP OQXQ GOXO XRJR XKHK ESCS XTXT |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 2,109 |
Words | 515 |
Stanzas | 19 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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