A Questionable Daydream



Candlelight shades covers the melancholy, like the grass blades surrender as the wind sways. He stares to the skies, asking why does love fall when it can fly so high? Where is the reality in which that only the magic of flow exist? Eliminating the shard glass that only has purpose to slit the wrist. Where are the meadows filled with rich bliss, with frolicking couples hands entangled creating one fist? Where are the gratitude enriched teardrops that glides down the surface of her skin, only for his hand to relocate and reassure, as his finger adjust the base of her chin? Their eyes declare their love for one another as their breath unifies. Two arise, stretching across the galaxy, to the edge of the universe two arrive. He then takes her body to become one and God verifies. I return from my daydream seeking God to clarify. Terrified, I ask, Is this too much to seek in the fabric of this reality? So here I lie, awake in the we hours of the night awaiting His reply.

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This poem showcase how a man questions if the fabric of our reality is able to give us the romantic experience that is congruent to what he experiences in the imagination realm.

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Written on March 18, 2023

Submitted by Solaceimaginationc.ceo on March 19, 2023

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Brandon Lee Minor

 · 1984 · North Carolina

Poetry has given me therapy since childhood. Words always come to me without issue of flow, as if we are symbiotic. Im a screenwriter by profession, so it also translates in my career. more…

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