OUR Ten Commandments



We're put here on Earth by God to keep us true as the Rod
So why should we destroy his True Word's that gives us Joy.

Are we safe among man,if we take it out of our plans
Are we safe among man, if we don't understand.

Can we teach our children the truth, if they
see it was removed
Can we teach our children the truth, if the prayer's are out of school.

We wonder what has went wrong here at home
It may just be that we, shamed GOD off his Throne.

What can we do to repair this, we start by cleaning up our mess
Put our prayer back in school
And let our Ten Commandments Rule

About this poem

To show how we need our prayers back in every one's life.

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Written on March 10, 2023

Submitted by normanstewart1957 on March 10, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
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Stanzas 5
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