Take Me Back, Scatter Me, Scatter Me
Don’t box me shut or enclose me in an urn to display me on the mantel,
Or drown me in the ocean or the sea, but scatter me, scatter me, take me back,
Scatter me under the bough of the towering oak tree near the cast iron bell,
Scatter a part of me on the left side of the soccer pitch where I played and fell
Where your mom and I sat and watched you both take your first steps.
From there walk across the creek to where a track once defined the field
And spread me in between lanes one and two, though any lane will do.
Walk along the creek, toward the rez, and scatter some of me along the way
Jump in if the water tempts you, do a cannonball for me, but better yet,
Swing out on the rope if it’s still hanging from the tree and let go
Dry off, sit in the sun awhile, and listen to the frogs and the bees
Continue beyond the rez and sprinkle some ashes near an oak tree or two
At the Indian mounds, find a resting place, and scatter me there too
Say a prayer for all who are buried there and include a prayer for me
Then take me and hike up to the pyramid top of my beloved Grass Mountain
Scatter me along the way, but save two handfuls, one for the summit
Where a rusty pipe perhaps still holds a list of faded names and dates
Sign my name, and sign yours too, but bring a sheet of paper just in case
Disperse a handful of me so I may rest among the poppies in spring
To inspire others to hike up Grass Mountain’s face
Inside the pipe or in a gopher hole, leave the proof that we made it to the top
Then find a rock to sit on and enjoy the beauty of the valley and this place.
Remember the quiet, the stillness in the air but head down before sunset.
Whatever life I made, this is where a part of me was meant to always stay,
Where my seeds were planted, where the both of you must now restart your way
A last fistful of me now is left remaining to be spread
Run! Skip back down the face, past the mounds, and to Tank Mesa’s gate!
Walk, jog, laugh, smile, and reminisce along the winding loop
Sprinkle what remains of me on the road, even if past the flickering light of day.
Where once your mother and I also walked, jogged, laughed, and smiled
Where once I held her hand and still believed in dreams.
About this poem
Instructions for my children upon my death.
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Written on December 29, 2005
Submitted by gbaranoff on March 25, 2023
Modified on May 02, 2023
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Characters | 2,458 |
Words | 474 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 27, 2 |
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