A Shadow in the Rain
Born from a light post on a black rainy night,
My lonely shadow trailing, failing to be noticed,
Until in angular movement up a brick building,
it slowly circled around beside me revealing
My head drooping on neckless shoulder;
rising in forward motion.
Now it is tall, as I am tall; a dark, faceless,
A wet reflection of me against the refulgent wall.
I turned my head to the left toward the past,
Revealing my long, curved nose.
A look of dignified wisdom as I foolishly
Stood in the lonely rain wondering who I am
And why.
This weeping apparition hides my eyes and tears
For shadows I will never see again.
Past the light, my shadow proceeds before me growing taller with each soggy, aching step,
Until the dark consumes my empty spirit
Passing in the night.
About this poem
A poem about grief, confusion, sadness, revealed in my shadow.
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Written on June 12, 2023
Submitted by frtjseigel on June 12, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 772 |
Words | 153 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 13, 5 |
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