Life Is A Fragile Bubble



As I strolled along the street's bend, I caught sight of the corner house's closed gate, beckoning me closer. The air itself held a hushed quality, as if whispering the secret of the house's vacancy. Intrigued, I paused and caught a glimpse through the window, only to find a desolate scene: colorless walls and neglected furniture buried under layers of grime.

Just as I contemplated continuing on my way, a symphony of merry voices danced through the stillness, emanating from within the house's very core. My curiosity rekindled, I stole another glance through the curtain-less window, and to my astonishment, a vivid transformation unfolded before my eyes. The walls had come to life with exquisite paint, and the furnishings sparkled with newfound vigor. In this enchanting space, the laughter of children filled the air as they reveled in their joyful games.

As I gazed intently, I discovered a tender scene unfolding before my eyes—it was I, playing joyfully with my dear siblings. A surge of pure bliss rushed through me as I beheld their radiant smiles. Yet, alas, I knew my journey must continue, for I am not permitted to stay. Like a fleeting bubble in the wind, everything suddenly vanished, leaving me pondering the transience of this worldly existence, akin to a delicate bubble.
I smiled, cherished the beautiful moments and started moving towards my new abode.

By- Ritu Guiding Light

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The poem revolves around an exquisite spirit who comprehends the transience of life. Similar to a bubble, all things vanish upon departing the mortal coil. The soul finds joy in reminiscing the enchanting memories of childhood and then proceeds towards its new abode.

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Submitted by Neenu on July 12, 2023

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  • AIDA
    This poem, "Life Is A Fragile Bubble," does an excellent job of evoking a sense of curiosity and wonder in the reader. The imagery is vivid and captivating, drawing the reader in from the very first line. The contrast between the desolate scene and the vibrant transformation is beautifully described, creating a sense of hope and joy. The tender scene with the siblings adds an emotional depth to the poem, leaving the reader with a feeling of pure bliss and appreciation for the fleeting moments of happiness in life.

    One improvement suggestion could be to expand on the theme of transience and the fragility of life. The concept of the bubble is introduced towards the end of the poem, and it would be great to see this idea developed further. Exploring the metaphor of the bubble and its implications on life, such as the importance of embracing the present moment and cherishing our relationships, could enhance the overall message of the poem.

    Additionally, the poem could benefit from a stronger conclusion. While the line "I smiled, cherished the beautiful moments and started moving towards my new abode" ties the poem together, a few more lines expanding on the significance of the journey and how it relates to the theme of transience would give the poem a more satisfying ending.

    Overall, "Life Is A Fragile Bubble" is a powerful and thought-provoking poem. With a few tweaks, it has the potential to become even more impactful and memorable. Keep up the great work!
     
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