The Fine Line



Open-mindedness
Can unfortunately
Transform
Into an absence
Of critical thinking. 
The vastness of thought
Curdling into void,
Where boundaries blur
Into nothingness,
And ideas dissolve
Into a haze
Of indifference,
Lost in the vast
Expanse of endless
Options.

A mind too open,
Like a door
Without a latch,
Invites the intrusion
Of every passing
Breeze,
Leaving one susceptible
To the whims
And fancies
Of others,
Drifting aimlessly
In the currents of opinion,
With no anchor
To guide
Or hold steadfast,
Floating adrift
In a sea
Of hollow echoes.

Empty promises
Of enlightenment whispered,
Like distant echoes
Bouncing off
Distant walls,
Fading into a resounding
Silence,
Devoid of substance.
An open mind
Should be tempered
With discernment.
Wisdom comes not
From blindly accepting all,
But from carefully
Sifting through
The sands of knowledge.

In the pursuit
Of open-mindedness,
One must remain cautious,
Navigating
The vast terrain
Of ideas
With purpose,
Avoiding
The treacherous
Trap
Of empty-mindedness.

It is in the depths
Of critical thinking,
Where open-mindedness
Blossoms
Into intellectual growth,
Where ideas
Find richness,
Depth,
And meaning.
Embrace
The open mind,
But not without
The discerning eye,
To ensure our thoughts
Flourish,
Not dissolve.  
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Written on July 12, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on July 12, 2023

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Words 272
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 15, 18, 16, 11, 16

Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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