Weaving gratitude and empathy



In my new home, I sit alone,
Guilt washes over, a sorrowful moan.
A beautiful house, abundance surrounds,
But memories of struggle, my heart confounds.
Dreams once mere whispers, now brought to life,
Yet sharing my joy, I fear will cause strife.
For friends and family, in dire despair,
My happiness, their burden, I cannot bear.
Embarrassed to show the excitement within,
Gratitude hidden, my emotions held in.
I ache for the ones with so little to spare,
Their plight grips my soul, a burden I wear.
Is it wrong to revel, to feel so blessed,
When others endure hardships, they can't divest?
Each carefree moment, a battle I fight,
Haunted by shadows of others' plight.
Yet amidst this struggle, a truth unfolds,
My heart is torn, but gratitude still holds.
I understand their pain, their struggles and strife,
With empathy and love, I share their life.
In this heart-wrenching journey, I've come to see,
The gift of compassion, the power to be free.
Though my blessings are vast, my soul is aware,
Of others' hardships, a burden we bear.
So I'll cherish my blessings, and with love impart,
To lift others up, to mend every heart.
In this tapestry of life, intertwined we'll be,
With compassion and love, we'll set spirits free

About this poem

In this poem, I delve into the intricate emotions that come with newfound blessings and the deep empathy I hold for those facing difficulties. I feel a sense of guilt and a haunting sorrowful moan. While abundance surrounds me, the memories of my past struggles create a bittersweet undertone. With honesty, I share the internal conflict that arises from experiencing dreams come true while fearing the impact of my happiness on others who are suffering. It's as if I wear the weight of their burdens, feeling embarrassed to reveal the joy within me, yet still wanting to share my gratitude. I acknowledge the importance of understanding others' pain and hardships. I vow to carry the burden of empathy, pledging to use my blessings to help others when I can . This poem serves as a testament to the compassion and love that connect us all, as we navigate life, bound by the power of shared experiences. 

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Written on August 04, 2023

Submitted by Kirsty_1 on August 07, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDDEEDDFFGGHHCCIIDDJJII
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,228
Words 240
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28

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