Entanglement of Victim’s Web



Go far thee, Guilt.
I want to not know you,
sense you, nor hear
the clattering of your chains
that hug my ankles,
ladening my steps.
Oppressing my goals.
Thy power rekindles flames
from which are born, embers
which layer my path.
I stumble, I fall
with force that awakens ashes
from their grounded beds.
Engulfed is sight
with clouded curtain,
hindering progression.

Must find myself a river.
Ease into its boundaries,
then float upon its water.
Watch as ashes become
tiny specks upon a ripple.
Lubricating will this water be
as shackles drop
with weight of ball and chain.
Goes far my Guilt,
forever sunken.

About this poem

When victimized as a child, it’s so difficult to let go of shame and unearned guilt.

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Submitted by Giselavigil on February 02, 2024

Modified by Giselavigil on February 02, 2024

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Gisela vigil

 · 1959 · Cuba

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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  • GCTHOMAS
    Great poem. I feel the change of mood from the first to second stanza. It moves you along to a kind of resolution. A few instances of alliteration whether designed or not gives a rhythm along with the works great cadence. Thanks so much. 
    LikeReply 18 months ago
  • alanswansea18
    You already know.
    LikeReply 110 months ago
  • alanswansea18
    That beautiful mind never ends.
    LikeReply10 months ago

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