Because



You can take to me with lumps of wood
And I wouldn’t make a move to stop you.
You can hurl your anger and hit out
At me in any way you see fitting,
For I will stand and take it -
Because...

You can become annoyed with me for
Using my voice and pen power to speak words,
Words that must be said - that must be voiced,
That must be listened to and heeded to –
For I take this stand with you –
Because...

You can snigger, snarl or sneer at me,
But my resolve will stand firm in my cause
To help you see what you need in life,
And that’s not busy - it’s not doing more,
It’s not filling time with work –
Because...

You have no-one who can offer you
Such opportunities to self-reflect.
I charge in and barge in unwanted -
I know that. I make no apologies.
You became part of my life -
Because...

So, take the time to hear this advice.
Pay heed to your needs – not those of others.
Their burdens you carry like a weight
Waiting to weigh you down – imprisoning
Your emotions. Release them –
Because…

Because Susanna recognises your very special qualities.                                     

About this poem

Giving advice that had to be given.

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Submitted by susannaelliott on April 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xaxbxC dxxaaC xcedxC axxfeC xxxbxC f
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,112
Words 229
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 1

Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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