Feeling the Heat



Cicadas screech the sound of summer,
signalling a long, hot day ahead.
Shall I find some shade?
Know I’ll find a good book.
Or …
better still
write some poetry.

How I love to lounge in nature’s shade,
under weeping willow's sweeping loft.
Shall I lie and dream?
I’d surely fall asleep.
But …
better still
write some poetry.

The songsters’ chorus joins cicadas.’
All wonder how long I’ll play squatter.
Shall I defy them,
and leave them to their peace?
No …
better still
write some poetry.

Too soon, noon’s heat rays find and stab me.
Stingrays ampullae of Lorenzini
a million sensors
sensing my discomfort.
So …
better not –
write some poetry.
© Jan 25      

About this poem

A simple ditty written in seconds when I was very hot last week.

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Submitted by susannaelliott on February 02, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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