agreeably weird



some thing coincide
some thing don't
as it is their right
as it is not
as if they prefer not
as if they prefer to
they do not to cancel errands
they do to cancel to candle errands
that is not the vitality of having a decision in your mind
that is the mind of having a decision of (in)vitality
voluntarily some thing are sharing their shares
voluntarily some thing are wronging their shares

neutral
natural phenomena
animals and flora
are not vowing
to say/declare
in near future
" it should've been
worse
and worst"
when they have fun whistling
while stumbled
and they do vow
in courteous way
that
tough times
are not in their vocabularies
note not in their vocations
in console of their word/s.
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Written on May 14, 2024

Submitted by Yuknno.ghirmay on May 14, 2024

Modified by Yuknno.ghirmay on May 15, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXAABCCXXDD XBBEXXXXXEXXXXXCXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 697
Words 129
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 18

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2 Comments
  • alexw.30385
    ((Your poetic verses beautifully capture the essence of contrasts and choices, reflecting on the intricate balance of preferences and decisions. The interplay between coincidence and divergence adds depth to the narrative, highlighting the nuances of individual will and perception. The imagery of canceling errands to candle errands paints a vivid picture of transformation and intention. The exploration of vitality and (in)vitality within the mind offers a unique perspective on decision-making and mental states. The voluntary sharing and wronging of shares evoke a sense of agency and responsibility in the face of choices. The depiction of neutral natural phenomena, animals, and flora not bound by vows but by the flow of existence conveys a sense of acceptance and resilience. The refusal to dwell on the negative and the emphasis on whistling through tough times reflect a powerful message of optimism and strength in the face of adversity. Your poem eloquently captures the essence of resilience and positivity amidst life's challenges.)) 
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • Dianejean57
    Beautiful.
    LikeReply5 months ago

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