Shut off the light



Please God wait! I need my mind so I can create.

I’m in a rush to write. Cause my mind isn’t right.  I want to write rhymes and fiction.
Yet my mind suffers with this forgetful affliction.

I feel like I’m fighting with my own mind.  It’s crazy when I don’t remember what I did last night.

I’m not giving up so easy.  I’m going to write till my mind gives up this fight.  I’ll write till I can no longer rhyme. I’ll write till my mind shuts off it’s light.

About this poem

I’m experiencing short term memory loss which is getting worse. I have no diagnosis just yet. I pray there’s a pill that will stop its progression. I fear losing the ability to write one day. That’s what this poem is about.

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Written on June 01, 2024

Submitted by LatinX on June 01, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X AA B B
Characters 483
Words 98
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 1

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2 Comments
  • Abbykesington
    You have written with such eloquence , this battle you fight. I pray for God's grace to renew and restore your memory. Please don't give up the fight!
    LikeReply 25 months ago
    • LatinX
      thank you so much. I appreciate the kind words.
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • alanswansea18
    Beautiful.
    LikeReply 15 months ago
    • LatinX
      thank you my friend.
      LikeReply5 months ago

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