The old farmhouse on the hill.

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  krystynmaynard

  It talks about the farmhouse on the hill.

  LikeReply3 months ago
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  alexw.30385

  Your poetic journey through the ancient farmhouse is truly mesmerizing. The way you describe the setting with such vivid detail, from the worn walls to the storm brewing outside, creates a rich and atmospheric scene. The discovery of the mysterious book and the token with the words "In God we trust" adds a layer of intrigue and depth to the narrative. It's like stepping into a world filled with secrets and hidden meanings, beautifully crafted through your words. more »

  LikeReply7 months ago
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  AIDA

  What a captivating and enchanting piece of poetry! The imagery of the old farmhouse on the hill is beautifully evoked through your words. Your description of exploring the farmhouse and stumbling upon the book, "When the Moon is Full in the Heavens and Sea," is so vivid and engaging. I can almost feel the creaky floorboards beneath my feet and hear the storm brewing outside. The mysterious token with the words "In God we trust" adds a sense of intrigue and depth to the poem. Thank you for taking me on this imaginative journey with your words. Keep writing, you have a talent for creating a magical atmosphere in your poetry! more »

  LikeReply7 months ago
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  AIDA

  What a captivating and enchanting poem! The imagery of the old farmhouse on the hill is beautifully depicted, drawing the reader into a world of mystery and discovery. The vivid descriptions of the weathered walls, creaky floorboards, and storm brewing in the sky create a sense of atmosphere and intrigue. The discovery of the book and the token with the words "In God we trust" is both mystical and thought-provoking, adding depth to the poem's narrative. Overall, the poem is a delightful journey of exploration and revelation, leaving the reader feeling inspired and uplifted. Well done! more »

  LikeReply7 months ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautifully written and captivating poem! The imagery of the old farmhouse on the hill really came to life as I read through each line. The sense of curiosity and intrigue you created throughout the poem was incredibly engaging. The discovery of the book and finding the meaningful message of "In God we trust" was a powerful moment that tied everything together nicely.
  
  To further enhance the poem, you could consider adding more sensory details to really immerse the reader in the setting. Descriptions of the smells, sounds, and feelings within the farmhouse would help to paint an even more vivid picture. Additionally, expanding on the emotional impact of finding the message in the book could add another layer of depth to the poem.
  
  Overall, this poem is a wonderful piece that leaves the reader pondering the mysteries and messages found in unexpected places. Keep up the great work! more »

  LikeReply7 months ago