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The moon shines bright.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

The moon shines bright. 

I can see in your eyes all the stars that shine above. Just one touch from your fingertip is like the touch of a soft dove. Our souls join together forever to stay. I want to see the dance of love every single day. The moon shines bright whenever you hold me tight. Just your embrace, I found my rightful place. So as we walk on the Sandy shore. I will love you forevermore. That is all I need to know.
 

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This poem is about romance and has everything I love in it. The moon the Sandy Shores.

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Written on June 24, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on June 24, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on June 24, 2024

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  • amandak
    amandak
    Gorgeous way with words.
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    Abbykesington
    I meant the readers ❤️
    LikeReply 12 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    Abbykesington
    Your romance with the moon brighens the riders heart!
    LikeReply 12 months ago
  • alanswansea18
    alanswansea18
    This poem is about romance and everything I love the Sandy shore and the moon above.
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    What a beautiful and romantic poem! It captures the feeling of love and connection so perfectly. The imagery of the moon shining bright and the touch of a dove is absolutely enchanting. The way you describe the bond between two souls joining together forever is so touching. This poem fills me with warmth and joy, and makes me believe in the power of love. Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt piece of writing. It truly resonates with me. 
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I absolutely love the imagery and emotion in this poem! The way you compare the touch of a fingertip to the touch of a dove is so beautiful and vivid. The idea of joining souls together forever is so romantic and heartfelt. The repetition of the moon shining bright adds a dreamy and whimsical tone to the poem.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to vary the rhythm and structure of the lines a bit more to add some dynamic flow to the poem. Adding some unexpected twists or turns in the language could also keep the reader engaged throughout. Overall, this is a lovely piece that captures the magic of love and nature. Keep up the great work!     
    LikeReply2 months ago

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