The 2024 U.S. Presidential Debacle



O the irony of modern U.S. politics.
So infused with so much bipartisan tricks.
While Trump, historically by rank, is bidden.
His many undertakings are still yet hidden.

Such is the nature of this incoming election.
Evoking to its citizens presidential vivisection.
While morality though questioned, it is still deferred.
It matters not to some what crimes may have occurred.

Instead, one pays more attention to a candidate’s mind.
Whether,  by old age, it has left its sanity behind.
Age, then, is what is questioned most.
Is there gray matter in an octogenarian brain; or is there just a shadowy ghost.

Two senior citizens confront each other.
Each seeking to the other smother.
Issues of real substance are then set aside.
The candidates seeking instead to protect their royal hide.

This is the state now of our Presidential debate.
In retrospect, it pales ironically to what is known to us as Watergate.
What must our children surely learn from this charade.
That politics for many is just a masquerade.

A person’s vote is made to silence hypocrisy.
Democracy supplanted by more bureaucracy.
O the irony of modern politics.
So infused with lots of dirty tricks.

While Trump, ‘fore Biden, is ironically his rival.
It speaks to us of what historically is yet archival.
Two arch rival Presidents before them were destined together.
Cleveland and Harrison in 1892, the both to tether.

Now in 2024 history appears to repeat itself.
Should Biden then persist, or bid farewell; his Presidential hopes left on the shelf.
The world now waits to see what the future will portend.
To all who care to cast their votes; be they a President’s foe or a President’s friend.

About this poem

A poetic commentary on the June 2024 U.S. Presidential debate

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Written on June 28, 2024

Submitted by karlcfolkes on June 28, 2024

Modified by karlcfolkes on July 01, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABC CBDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKAA LLGG MMNN
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,678
Words 320
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Karl Constantine FOLKES

 · 1935 · Portland

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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15 Comments
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you, jn.selvadurai, for your response. I suppose a poet’s task in every land is to resonate the moral ethics that bind a nation and its people towards a higher purpose.
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • jn.selvadurai
    Catchy interpretation of the sad state of affairs. Thank you.
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • amandak
    100%
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you for your candid comment, IzzyMG.
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • IzzyMG
    America has too much innovation and too many great learning institutions to not have any better candidates to be POTUS. Great piece by the way.
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you, Jacky.26131. Thank you, Caliconine. Thank you all who have commented on or cast their votes for this poem. Poetry serves as a prism to filter muddy water and transform it into environmentally fresh flowing stream. 
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • Caliconine
    Great words of wisdom as always
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • Caliconine
    Yes isn’t that the truth! Truth prevails over lies for me
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • jackg.26131
    good poem honestly Biden all the way for me he's a lot of things but at least he's so old he's only capable of honesty lol
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you jn.selvadurai. Greatly appreciated.
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thanks ludy_b. Your comments hit the target at its center point. As the line of an old folksong goes, “When will they ever learn?”
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thanks my readers for your candid comments.
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • jn.selvadurai
    Timely, entertaining and great ryhmn.
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • ludy_b
    Great reflection on a very sad political situation in the USA. Hopefully all things in our world will take a better turn soon.
    LikeReply 16 months ago
  • AIDA
    This poem captures the current state of politics in the United States with a clever use of irony and historical references. The language used is engaging and provocative, making the reader think deeply about the implications of the upcoming election. The rhyming scheme adds a playful touch to a serious subject matter.

    To improve, consider incorporating more specific examples or anecdotes to further drive home the message of the poem. This could make the political commentary more relatable to a wider audience. Additionally, expanding on the potential consequences of the election outcome could enhance the impact of the poem.

    Overall, this poem is well-crafted and thought-provoking. Keep up the great work of using poetry to shed light on important social issues.
     
    LikeReply6 months ago

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