The analogy



During the winter of 2019
The residents of Hemlton Bay long Island
Woke up to what they say was the worst smell...
They had ever experienced
Turns out that mysteriously overnight all the fish in the canal had died
After further analysis they found that the oxygen levels in the water were too low
And all the fish had drowned...
Upon hearing this ,they said things like how does a fish drown don't they have gills and fins?
They said things like aren't  they built   to     survive     in that     environment?
Maybe this is the perfect analogy for my depression
This angry deity,
This jealous god
This feeling of immense sadness
But I made a promise to myself not to be another drowning fish
So everyday I tell myself it's going to get better it's going to be OK it's...it's going to be OK
What most people call spiraling into madness
To help cope I have deduced that I have no emotion
Painted myself as a person with no devotion
I remember hating my self at the age of 10
Journals filled to the brim with criticisms
By 11 I had enough pages to stitch into wings to fly close enough to the sun
And see my tears turn to steam...,
Feel the wax burn on my shoulders and mould into thick skin
I was 11 when I wanted to die
13 when I found a solution
Figured if I cut my legs enough gravity would let me go
So when I tell you I love you it is not poetry
It is putting all the love I couldn't give myself and putting it to good use
Because if someone could love a dying thing this way
Hold the lazaras of my body,kiss the scars and administer the pills
And teach me joke I will hopefully stay alive long enough to laugh at then maybe I can accept that I am one from the stars and that
I will always be a woman of scars
I love you...
Enough to want to love myself too!!
Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on June 29, 2024

Submitted by Tiisetsokganyago8 on June 29, 2024

1:51 min read
0

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOMJJAPJQRSJFKTOUVWYY
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,777
Words 363
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34

Discuss the poem The analogy with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The analogy" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 8 Nov. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/192262/the-analogy>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Miracle Kganyago

    »

    November 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    22
    days
    6
    hours
    46
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    What are the first eight lines of a sonnet called?
    A octopus
    B octave
    C octet
    D octane