This Strange Land

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a captivating and adventurous poem! I love how you take us on a journey through this strange land filled with interesting characters and unexpected twists. The imagery of meeting the tin woodman, cowardly lion, powerful man, Glinda, and wicked witch of the west really brings the story to life.
  
  Your use of repetition with the phrase "I wander this strange land" really emphasizes the feeling of being lost and trying to find your way back home. The line "Click clack click clack" adds a nice rhythm to the poem and creates a sense of urgency.
  
  One suggestion for improvement would be to delve deeper into the emotions of the main character as they navigate this strange land. How do they feel about meeting each new character and facing different challenges? Adding more depth to the protagonist's thoughts and feelings could make the poem even more engaging for the reader.
  
  Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading "This Strange Land" and I think you have a unique and creative voice. Keep up the great work and continue to explore new ways to bring your stories to life through poetry! more »

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