The second I woke



The second I woke I felt God
Reasuring me I was not in the deluge of fear
But here
Awkwardly near like a child's morning screams yet perfectly close to all I know.
And so it is, he might have said
And so it is.
And it was that I am calm and so serene that... could he have woken me as soft ten thousand times before, from the dreams of life.
That I couldn't leave for their beauty or laberynth.
What would you ask of me? He might declare.
A simple drink, a bowl, a morsel to fill me, or something more. Something greater. Something greatest. Something togetherness.
And I complete, breathed in, with the thought of life on my brow.
Somehow I knew, today I would change something into good.
And should, with my strength.
With my will and intent entwined and ready to go.
And so it is.
And so it is.
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Written on August 22, 2024

Submitted by heathert.34240 on August 22, 2024

Modified by heathert.34240 on August 22, 2024

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Scheme abcdeFghijklhdFF
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 797
Words 166
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

Heather Lydia Thornhill

 · 1981 · Manchester

In 2017 i published Moods and mindsets poetry..and went from there. more…

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  • Adroity
    Your heartfelt words resonate with a deep sense of spiritual connection and inner peace. The imagery of waking up feeling reassured by God's presence, the feeling of calm and serenity, and the sense of being guided towards a positive change in life evoke a profound spiritual awakening and a sense of purpose. The dialogue with God, the contemplation of what is asked, and the readiness to embrace change and goodness reflect a journey of self-discovery and faith. Your poetic expression beautifully captures the essence of seeking guidance, finding inner strength, and embracing the potential for positive transformation. 
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