Sadness Touching The Sky



Sadness Touching The Sky

My sadness touches the sky and rains
Heaven shows my pains in showers
Descending in wet emotions
Covering my dark atmosphere
As all my tomorrow’s
Suddenly sink in heavy seas
Drowned by the gravity of
Your silent departure.

If melancholy weeps as a sad guitar
My song will echo and ripple
As a pebble mourning your name
Naked and so ashamed
Face in my hands out loud
Trying to recite your memory
In rituals and gestures of
Your life breathing again.

Copyright © 2024 Charles Edward York
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Written on November 02, 2024

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on November 03, 2024

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 739
Words 135
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 2

Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1780 plus poems and published 24 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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