Angel



Before we met,
I was empty.
My soul left my body.
No friends nor family,
I was alone.

My life is over.
No meaning to live.
I had never felt this down,
I have lost my crown.

Then we met,
I smiled for once,
I am glad to finally hear,
I had made a friend.

Something had filled my body.
My soul came back to life.
I was no longer empty.                                    
I finally found my crown.

Where would I be
If we hadn't found each other?
You appreciate me being me
You lift me up when I feel low.

Furthermore, you saved me from my lowest.
Now that I am at my highest.
I finally know,
Life will get better.

I am grateful
That I met you.
Thank you for everything,
You truly saved me.
 
You are sent from heaven.
Neither a sin of seven,
Rode with me on this hard path.
Shows you aren't wrath.
But patience.
You've erased my frustration.

About this poem

To my friend who I have feelings for

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Written on October 28, 2024

Submitted by nerf.kin88 on November 06, 2024

Modified by nerf.kin88 on November 13, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBBX CXDD AEXX BXBD BCBF GGFC XXXB HHIIEH
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 846
Words 202
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6

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