Awaken
The night stands too cold , hefty to breathe .
My steps, in search of way , that brings me home.
For I behold no men at streets , to guide .
This tears my covet of life .
A fall , brings me to a loathing sea .
I can't swim ! , now who saves ?,
A boat , out of nowhere descends, floating.
A stranger ,with a kerchief veiling face , approaches me .
"It's all over , little boy . Let reinstate glorify "
His vows being eerie , I forth , I tried advancing , but I failed.
Seems a limb being pulled, "help !........." , a fall again.
With a bunch of finest air , my eyes blinked open .
Wobbling them made my spirits , so high ! .
Oh ! my parents "there" , i pointed .
They hurried, with a weep they crawled at my bed.
A blink again , a fall again ,
Brings me to the orenda of seven.
About this poem
A teenage boy , raised by un-supportive parents and toxic environment. At steets while pondering about his life-problems , he got into an accident. It brought him into comma . He saw several instances signifying his current life conditions. When agent of death arouse to carry him , he suddenly got delivered into real world. After seeing him awaken , his parents rushed at the bed , crying. But sadly at last he passed away .
Written on July 16, 2009
Submitted by studioyamass on November 28, 2024
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XXXX AXXABXC DBXXCD |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 782 |
Words | 158 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 7, 6 |
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