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Manzil ki talash

Shreya Singh 13

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14 lakh ke bhir mein gumsuda si hu minnaton ke bad bhi lapta si hi hu

Na muskan na Khushi hai bs kiye jaa rhi hu shayad main abhi bebas si hu

Socha tha daurr aayega mera bhi
Mgr abhi main chhup si hu

Umeedin sbne lgayi baithi hai mujhse
Mgr main uss kabil nhi

Kya sapne dekhe the Kya chal rha h
Aashu to u behte h jaise Ganga ke kinare dher si ho

Khud ko dheere dheere khote jaa rhi hu Lekin manjil pane ki kosis abhi bhi kiye jaa rhi hu

Khi kho na jaoun main ess bhir mein
Usse pane ki khwaish rkhte rkhte

Marham ki umeed Kyu rkhu jb Dard chuna hai khud ke liye
Abb to arsa bettne ko hai khud ko muskrata dekhne ke liye

Bahut kosis Kiya ess safar ko jine ki
Manzil pane ki khwaish mein raste ke bs katein paye rhi hu

14 lakh ke bhir mein gumsuda si hu
Minnaton ke bad bhi lapta si hu

Jb milegi tu mujhse main sawal krungi tujhse Kyu diye tune dard Etne
                                              - श्रेया ❤️

About this poem

I write this poem while I am preparing for my jee exam as I have seen the rising competition in this rat race exam.

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Written on November 02, 2024

Submitted by Singhshreya46571 on November 04, 2024

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Scheme A A AA XA XX A BX CC XA AA B
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 943
Words 199
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
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