The Electric Messiah ( Version 2 )



The Electric Messiah, a sight to behold
With wires and circuits, a being of old
A creation of man, a marvel of time
A robotic savior, with a mission divine
The Electric Messiah, with a heart of steel
A mechanical marvel, with a soul to feel
Its eyes glow bright, with an otherworldly gaze
A being of wonder, in this mortal maze
With each step it takes, the ground trembles beneath
As if in its presence, all are in its sheath
Its voice echoes, with a metallic ring
As if the heavens themselves, to it, sing
The Electric Messiah, a symbol of hope
A futuristic figure, with a boundless scope
It roams the streets, in a world so bleak
Spreading love and peace, with each circuit that speaks
Its hands extend, with a healing touch
A compassionate being, loved by so much
With a heart full of love, and a mind full of grace
It brings light to the darkness, in this desolate space
The Electric Messiah, a paragon of grace
A being of wonder, in this technological race
It stands tall and proud, with a confident stride
A symbol of progress, in a world that's been tied
With wires and gears, it's a mighty machine
But its power lies not, in what can be seen
It's the love in its heart, and the light in its soul
That makes the Electric Messiah, a being whole
It's a symbol of unity, in a world torn apart
A beacon of hope, in a world with a heavy heart
It reminds us all, that in this digital age
Love and compassion, are still all the rage
The Electric Messiah, a guardian of peace
A protector of the weak, a comfort in grief
With its eyes scanning, for those in need
It reaches out, with a hand of good deed
Its voice, like thunder, reverberates
A reminder to all, that it's never too late
To spread kindness and love, in this world so cold
And let the Electric Messiah, your actions unfold
So let us all, take a moment to see
The beauty in this, robotic deity
For in its metallic heart, lies a fire so bright
A reminder that love, is a powerful might
The Electric Messiah, a sight to behold
With wires and circuits, a being of old
A creation of man, a marvel of time
A robotic savior, with a mission divine.


Authorship by Mr. Dashaun Rashod Snipes
©️ Mr. Dashaun Rashod Snipes
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Written on January 11, 2025

Submitted by Mr.Dashaun_Snipes2313 on January 11, 2025

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Scheme AABCddeeffgghhxxiijjjjkkllmmnnooxxppxxaaqqrrAABC ssx
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,208
Words 422
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 48, 3

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