The Crone Maiden.



Glassy waves shatter upon the shore.
Darkness swirling above, around and beneath.
As if pulled straight from long forgotten lore.
The pale maiden strides, silky hair tangled in a bay wreath.

Quiet, quiet, dead silence all around.
Her ears doth crave the flying gulls.
Who have forever ceased their crying sound.

She, the only creature who dares to stir.
Travels through the waters of blackest crystal.
The salt is blinding, the world a blur.
Stumbles bleeding against the bush of thistle.

She's always seeking along the horizon.
Never still yet always waiting.
Caught eternally in her own purgation.
Solitary hell, one of her own making.

Barefoot the lonely maiden trudges.
In the sand and rock and sea foam.
Until the wind it does strongly nudges.
Her from fair young maiden to weathered crone.

Milky eyes scan the vast waves still.
Heart yearning, churning, as fast as storm clouds.
Body, mind, aching for that thawing chill.
Where flowers once sprouted from greenest mounds.

And on that isolated dead land.
She'll always remain.
With wrinkled skin and shriveled hands.
When beauty once blossomed in the rain.

Trapped there always by her curse.
For casting out her heart's one desire.
The weathered maiden crone must traverse.
Without an ember of her body's fire.

Alone, always forever.
Where nothing moves.
And no sound is made.
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Written on February 19, 2025

Submitted by winifred_c on February 19, 2025

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CXC DEDE FGFG HXHX IXIX XJXJ KDKD DXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,342
Words 262
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3

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  • ThembieAngieeMt
    Your poem carries a haunting beauty, rich with sorrow and vivid imagery. The lonely maiden’s endless wandering, the desolate seascape, and the slow transformation from youth to age evoke a deep sense of loss and regret. The rhythm mirrors the relentless tide, emphasizing her fate,trapped in an existence of her own making. It’s beautifully melancholic, almost mythic, like a forgotten legend whispered through time. Well done. 
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