Whispers of the Blue Deep



Whispers of the Blue Deep
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Twice hung with a breeze cool of shades vast,
Two fruits which rind plump, more lush than the sea,
Above eager gnats climbing a tall tree,
As high as can solely reach a plumb mast.

Much grain shall overshadow the hue of sand,
Quicker than sunlight, I have seen it seep,
Whispering secrets shared by the blue deep,
Louder than subtle waves heard on a strand.

Beneath a rosy morning we respire,
Among pitch black fog abandoned as dust,
Baked by the sun's kiln heat and lightning fire;

Covering the regions of Earth with crust,
A recurring assertion of Time's ire,
Based on what we strive to hold in its gust.
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Written on February 21, 2025

Submitted by robertrad2021 on February 21, 2025

Modified by robertrad2021 on February 22, 2025

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBA CDDC EFE FEF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 609
Words 127
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3

Roberto Suárez Torres

 · 1983 · New York

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