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See You in My next Life

Jesus Penaranda

I have a distant lover, so distant you feel to me.
A Love nourished with ink & passionate metaphors.
To know your smile, to hear the sound of your voice and feel your laugh lines, gently caressing my skin...

To have the warm scent of your breath waking me in
the middle of the night. I need you closer.
Standing by my side. My heart longs for you.
So distant you feel to me, you’re like that star, shining so far...
All I can do, is get lost in its beauty.
You're like the rain, awakening the garden that’s in my soul.
In the caverns of my heart it resides so deep inside.
As I wonder will someday she stand by my side,
For never will I see my distant lover, until the end.
See you in my next life forever friend...
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Submitted by JesusPenaranda on April 19, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Scheme ABC CXXXAXDDEEB
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 737
Words 143
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 11
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Jesus Penaranda

Name: Jesus Penaranda Race: Cuban American Eye color: Hazel Occupation: Communications Hobbies: Photography, writing, spirituality, family outtings, napping Nick Name: Hace History: Hace was one of those kids in high school who got along with various niches. As a result, he ended up with many different types of friends from various nationality and as soon as he graduated traveled the United States from NY to California and places in between. Nonetheless he was accepted by all different cultures and was considered open minded. During a period of living in Texas he attended acommunity college as a electronics student, and somehow was lucky enough to land a job with a large utility company. Remained there and moved to Southern California. Were he took up the study of communication.. Other Facts: Extremely intuitive and sensitive, is an old soul...With an ability to learn something from anyone. I already lost touch with a couple of people I use to be.. more…

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  • Jackie Lynn Singleton
    Jackie Lynn Singleton
    Hey when I click on the MORE button on your Profile above it takes me to a Search Screen ... Just a FYI .... xx
    LikeReply 19 years ago
    • STANDS4
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      Dear Jackie, thank you for letting us know of this error. We fixed it and added his biography to our Biographies.net site: http://www.biographies.net/bio/b/c09f939a. Thank you again and have a great day! 
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    • Jackie Lynn Singleton
      Jackie Lynn Singleton
      STANDS4 Thank You for paying such Great Attention to Comments , What Superb Service ... Now that is worth A Million Bucks Now Days ... I Aplaude You for Your Customer Service and being on top of Issues ... I Know JP will be very appreciative too .. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH O:) 
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      Jackie Lynn Singleton it's our pleasure! Thank you for your support :)
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  • Jackie Lynn Singleton
    Jackie Lynn Singleton
    You Have an Amazing Heart JP ... I Love Feeling Parts of it through your words ~
    LikeReply 19 years ago

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