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The Final Good bye

Monica Mackness

As she lays aside
all her future hopes
The Castle's built-in air,
she sees them crashing down.
The last hope,
the last tear drop.
That's all she had
No regrets, no vengeance
In peace she let go of a love
 that didn't reciprocate her vibe.
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Submitted by mon5mackness on February 08, 2021

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIJ
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 232
Words 45
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
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Monica Mackness

 · 1991 · Telangana

Fond of music, art, dance, nature,writing Why did I start writing As a kid I had the habit of writing diary's, making art something like scrapbook. Writing down my favourite Lyrics. Getting my hands dirty with colours, stickers. Hahahaha that's fun. Somewhere in this busy life, I stopped doing them all. I must say recently I found back my passion a year ago. All thanks to God. I felt it was a miracle for me. From then I didn't stop writing. I write to clear my mind, I write because I feel good, I write when I feel appreciated, I write to let the world know about the people who shaped me into the woman I have become Heal Build Conquer is my Motto In order to be successful in life, be successful in mind body and spirit. more…

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