Tear Stained Eyes

sage wrobel 2001 (New York)



All because of your broken heart
You fell apart
I thought you were my friend
But you made that quickly come to an end

Our friendship you threw aside
Because of your thoughts of suicide
Clearly I was wrong
To think the suicidal thoughts could be prolonged

You made me cry
When you said your final goodbye
When you tell us to beware and prepare
It showed you clearly don't care

Now look at all the pain you brought
Due to your suicidal thought
You want to be free
Even if we don't agree

Suicide is what you want to do
I just wish you wouldn't follow through
You have people you can count on
Some of our friends you should've called upon
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Submitted by princesss.66989 on March 07, 2021

Modified on March 16, 2023

38 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCXX DDEE FFGG HHII
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 615
Words 123
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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