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Falling down the Rabbit Hole

BlackAngel Evo

Rainy clouds start to stir
Blackness starts to wash over me
Funny how the weather matches my mood
Reflecting on myself starting to brood

Standing as an onlooker watching my life fall apart
Staring as the darkness starts to control
My life.
My love.
Swallowing me whole

Hate falling apart
Hate losing control
Don't know who I am anymore
Slowly falling down the rabbit hole

Standing as an onlooker watching my life fall apart
Staring as the darkness starts to control
My life.
My love.
Swallowing me whole

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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xxaa BCDEC bcxc BCDEC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 486
Words 88
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 5
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