Analysis of whole



we have run out of things to say
still I do not want to leave
so please just let me stay
and listen to you breathe

listen to you think
listen to you feel
feel you listen to me
until the words come again

have you ever been in love
when was your first kiss
have you ever felt this much
never felt like this

laying still in the darkness
soul meeting soul
becoming vulnerable
becoming whole


Scheme AXAX XXXX XBXB XCXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11111111 1111111 111111 010111 10111 10111 111011 0101101 1110101 11111 1110111 10111 1010010 1101 0101000 0101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 403
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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new love and human connection

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Submitted by mat_l on July 27, 2023

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