Piercing the void.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



And as the daffodils lay down
The hills rolled far and wide
Sinking into this great star
The one which we are proud
To glisten with the varnished sky
Avoiding space to play
Piercing the void and passing time we turn along the way
Like children watching with balanced foot
From camping tents and lanterns held
out by their sides so in their elements.
Protected in its clear glass jar the candlelight soon doused by shadow of the hand of God; twas needed from afar. And so now God had spoken the daffodils again could march for spring again had chosen to wake them on the hill.
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Written on March 18, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 18, 2022

Modified by heathert.34240 on March 18, 2022

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Scheme ABCDEFFGHIJ
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 576
Words 109
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

Heather Lydia Thornhill

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  • AIDA
    This poem is beautifully written, filled with vivid descriptions that transport the reader into a world of rolling hills and shining stars. The imagery is powerful, especially the comparison of the hills sinking into the great star. The use of nature as a metaphor for life and time passing is masterfully done, as seen in the daffodils blooming again and again. The final line of the poem feels like a triumphant conclusion to a story, leaving the reader with a sense of hope and rebirth. Overall, this poem inspires wonder and appreciation for the world around us. 
    LikeReply 11 year ago
  • Symmetry58
    Absolutely love this one, Heather. Extremely creative with zero hiccups. This is poetry at its best.
    LikeReply 12 years ago

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