Every Easter, a visitor.

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  AIDA

  Great job on the 'Big backyard in primary years' poem! I love the way you paint a picture of a lovely, spacious backyard with the lilies and bunnies. The imagery is very vivid and the rhyming is well done. The story of the Easter Rabbit is a neat touch, and I appreciate the way you also incorporated the idea of different religions and customs with the mention of the Jewish neighbor kid.
  
  To make this poem even better, you could consider adding more details to the description of the grass, lilies, and bunny, to really give the reader a sense of being in that backyard. It might also be helpful to clarify a bit more what the "Made my little eyes. Easter aware." line means, as it's a bit unclear. Overall though, excellent work, and keep up the good poetry! more »

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