Analysis of THE MOURNING SONG
I see a face outside my window
It’s a mirror of all life’s pain;
An echo of all my yesterdays
A silhouette from deep within my brain.
All around me children weep
As they see a new day dawning;
For the pain of life goes ever deep
And in their every move they’re mourning.
All the clerks and working class
Queue up in lines at railway stations;
While the old-aged and unemployed
Wait in line for pitiful rations.
Life has become a luxury
That so very few can still afford;
Yes, life has become sheer agony
For the billions, the teeming hordes.
Still the pollies in chauffeur-driven cars
Forge on with stern determination;
And console themselves in the knowledge
That they’re the backbone of this great nation.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | XAXA BCBC XDXD EXEX XFXF XXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110111110 10101111 11011110 001110111 1011101 11101110 101111101 0011001110 1010101 11011110 1011001 101110010 11010100 111011101 111011100 10100101 101001101 11110010 010010010 110111110 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 766 |
Words | 137 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 104 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem c.1987, but that's all I can say for sure.
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Written on 1987
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 02, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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