Analysis of LOVE IN BETWEEN



I sit back and listen,
Watch them play and interact.
These girls are all so different
Personalities,
Do not exactly match.
They feud and they fight,
Pushing each others buttons
Nasty comments,
Flying out of their mouths.
But you can bet,
They are playing nicely
With each other,
By the end of the night.
I wish I had more time,
With them
I love to watch them grow,
But how quickly they are changing
I want them to take life slow.
I only hope they know,
How much I love them
In my heart,
They have a special place.
When they are not here,
I feel so empty
Loneliness fills up that space.
I can only try to teach them,
How to be sister's
And know that is a love
Between them,
That nobody can ever replace.
My wish for them
Is to be happy and free,
And never forget
Their grandmother,
Who will always love them..
Unconditionally.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLFMNOPOONQRSKRNTUNRNKJLNK
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 111001 11111100 0100 110101 11011 1011010 1010 101111 1111 111010 1110 101101 111111 11 111111 11101110 1111111 110111 11111 011 110101 11111 11110 1001111 11101111 11110 011101 011 111101 1111 1111001 01001 110 11111 01000
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 825
Words 182
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 641
Words per stanza (avg) 158

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This is a little poem about my granddaughters

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Written on July 24, 2022

Submitted by Raven69 on July 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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