Analysis of Mahi
She was fire and her;snowflake
She hid in her shadows
Just like lava being consolidated in lattice lace
Holding onto the grim of her warm embrace,though defeated
Sorrow turned into surrour,like cupcake's creamy glaze
A demon gifted with an Angel face
Heaven Chambers;guardian angel
How did you tame this abhorrent devil
Turned the demons rage,into a laudable case
Comfort and peace in her demise
How must you possess such chaotic deluge;
Handling it with such mamello
Scaring my demon,Threating it with your incandescent shaft
Luminosity like the heavens
I'm human again;traquil and calm
You mucked out this brute
Destroyed it's evil roots
Now our friendship,an adamantine affiliation
Living so far yet so near to my heart
I sit and wonder,
How eternally grateful i am,for your warm solicitous embosom
Where I'll always feel secure
Oh lord,this bondsome confection is what I'll always be thankful for
Scheme | XXAXX ABBA XXBXXCXX XXDCXD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111001 11001 11101001000101 1010011011010 1010111101 0101011101 10110 1111101010 1010101001 10010001 11101101010 101111 10111110101 11010 110101 11111 011101 110110010 1011111111 11010 1010010111101001 111101 11101011111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 907 |
Words | 164 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 4, 8, 6 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 185 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
About this poem
This poem is about my Bestfriend Mahi in which i'm metaphorically referring her as a goddess who saved me from depression and suicidal thoughts.she is my muse and I'm expressing my unconditional love and appreciation for her in this poem.
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