Mahi



She was fire and her;snowflake
She hid in her shadows
Just like lava being consolidated in lattice lace
Holding onto the grim of her warm embrace,though defeated
Sorrow turned into surrour,like cupcake's creamy glaze

A demon gifted with an Angel face
Heaven Chambers;guardian angel
How did you tame this abhorrent devil
Turned the demons rage,into a laudable case

Comfort and peace in her demise
How must you possess such chaotic deluge;
Handling it with such mamello
Scaring my demon,Threating it with your incandescent shaft
Luminosity like the heavens
I'm human again;traquil and calm
You mucked out this brute
Destroyed it's evil roots


Now our friendship,an adamantine affiliation
Living so far yet so near to my heart
I sit and wonder,
How eternally grateful i am,for your warm solicitous embosom
Where I'll always feel secure
Oh lord,this bondsome confection is what I'll always be thankful for

About this poem

This poem is about my Bestfriend Mahi in which i'm metaphorically referring her as a goddess who saved me from depression and suicidal thoughts.she is my muse and I'm expressing my unconditional love and appreciation for her in this poem.

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Submitted by Hamnaasif355 on September 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXAXX ABBA XXBXXCXX XXDCXD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 907
Words 164
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 8, 6

Hamna asif

I,Hamna asif am an intermediate graduate,an aspiring poet,debator and a position holder in Essay writing competitions.she discovered her love for poetry in 8th grade in the year 2018.i remember my 6th grade teacher expressing her concern to my mother about being a hopeless case in English and if I continue this way I'll fail my English exams in the near future.Hearing this pained me,I was devastated but instead of pitying myself I used that as motivation to improve my English.i read alot of novels and ever since then i've been obsessed with discovering new novels to increase my knowledge and ameliorate my English.Reading and writing in my leisure time,when I'm sad,bored or in a solitary state is quite a traquilizing hobby.Sitting on my bed,sipping tea and watching the view outside my window whilst writing poetry is super therapeutic.soon after 7th grade I started studying poetry encrypting the meaning of every verse. Even since then i've developed an unhealthy obsession with bleeding my emotions on a paper.Now i want to share my poetry with the world and encourage other poets to come forward and mesmerize others with their magnetic poetry. more…

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