Analysis of out of medicine



My heart feels like a pulpy mess
Capillaries exploded, arteries clogged with darkness
Blood with too much pressure
My eyeballs erode with the sun
My skin slicks off my skeleton
My organs spill on top of each other
My thoughts are only to breathe and be
No more, no more
I'm less


Scheme ABCDDCEFA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 1000101001110 111110 1101101 11111100 1101111110 111101101 1111 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 278
Words 52
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 224
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted by McPeek on June 07, 2023

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