Analysis of Snakes In Meeting



Snakes In Meeting
By Chris Commodore©2001

Twisting, wining some bright shiny
Cautiously some dull and slimy
As if sizing which one’s friendly
Which one may start something ugly

So, the roll call promptly started
Chore that fell to wily Cobra
So, she bared her fangs for order
Call to introduce each other.

Head held high like Egypt’s Pharaoh,
Co Bra greeted Anna Conda.
Hello Anna, where’s Green Mamba?
O, she’s out with Boa Constrictor.

And that’s Ser Pent near the lake,
Courting dainty Coral snake,
That’s his terrible mistake.
Should be out with Garter Snake.

On the ledge is Ms. Puff Adder;
Grates her scales, but she’s no rattler.
See that noisy Rattle Snake?
Will not tolerate mistakes.

That foreboding mass of muscle,
Lumbering slowly in the sun;
Far from him you do your hustle.
Señor Ama Zon Py Thon.

What about that stick-like fella,
Coiled and waiting over there?
Does he always use that stance?
Yes, that’s Moody Fer de Lance

Who’s that multi-colored fellow?
Painted black with red on yellow.
To the coral snake she’s cousin.
Folks say that she’s laced with poison.

And that guest in red and black,
Hiding in the Weeping Willow,
O she’s harmless, venom lack;
Just looks like the yellow fellow.

Over there is Sir Pitt Viper.
Hissing, blowing; she’s no Piper.
Winding, sliding side to side;
Those who cross her surely died.

Absent here is Ms. Black Mamba,
Slithered on to see her doctor.
Small aggressive Cotton Mouth,
Practices oh, way down South.

Did you hear the Golden Head
Claimed an island off Brazil?
Careless birds their meals instead
But blunt intruders they will kill.

Tigers Black, rule in Australia
Mambas Green, South Africa
Myriads more have conquered India
Central, South America.

All right now, this meeting’s over
Out of their way, just let them slither
Most still hold a deadly dose
Never mind their quiet pose


Scheme XX AAAA BCDD EBCD FFFF DDFX GHGX CXII EEHH JEJE DDKK CDLL MNMN CCCC DDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 1110 10101110 10011010 11101110 11111010 10111010 11111010 11101110 1101110 1111110 1110101 01101110 111110010 0111101 1010101 1110001 1111101 10111110 101111100 1110101 111001 10101110 10010001 11111110 111111 10111110 1010101 111111 1110111 11101010 10111110 10101110 11111110 0110101 1000101 1110101 11101010 10111110 10101110 1010111 1110101 10111110 1111010 1010101 1001111 1110101 1110101 1011101 11010111 10110010 1011100 11110100 1010100 11111010 111111110 1110101 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,884
Words 368
Sentences 29
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

I have a fear of snakes and knowing that from one of my Biology classes, one of my first year college professors once asked me to write down the names of as many snake species as I could. In 2001, I was rummaging through some old papers and found that assignment. There and then I decided to write a poem about the outcome.

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Submitted by ti.min on October 16, 2023

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