Analysis of Heavenly Feminism



Heavenly Feminism
By Chris Commodore© 2023

Life empties from your every pore
No matter what the daily score
Love moving like a heaving wave
You’re gratifying bold and brave

Your every act, your every move
The air you stir needs nix to prove
Your smile forces the sun to blink
Of angel’s grade you clearly are the link

The helper that Almighty God
Shaped not from ordinary sod
But molded right from Adam’s rib
With assets never wan nor glib

Your spirit typifies the rain
That falls to pacify life’s pain
Erasing every thought that spoils
Earth’s agony and endless toils

And yet you’re feminism true
Nature’s truth, oh through and through
With power and profuse celestial grace
You move and keep alive the human race

No matter what you think, you’re error-free
You never was nor Adam meant to be
A masterpiece of everlasting grade
You’re fearfully and wonderfully made


Scheme XA AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL
Poetic Form
Metre 100100 1110 110111001 11010101 11010101 1100101 1100111001 01111111 11100111 1101110101 01010101 1111001 11011101 1110111 1101001 1111011 010100111 11000101 0111001 1011101 1100010101 1101010101 1101111101 1101110111 01010101 11010001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 894
Words 160
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Recognizing and celebrating the purpose and value of the woman across the human race

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Submitted by ti.min on October 19, 2023

Modified by ti.min on October 20, 2023

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