Analysis of Previous Employer



They claimed to be a friend,
That would stand by me to the end,
And reminded me over and over.

I resisted their conditioning,
And fought off their soliciting,
To evade the mental takeover.

I am sure it was intimidation,
That created the situation,
For the desire to send me away.

My exemplary behavior,
Left no need for a savior,
I was a leader that could not stay.

With desires to get even,
And call each a lying heathen,
I realized that exodus would be bliss.

Would be better for my health,
So I kept my hands to myself,
Said "a Dios" and blew them a kiss.

I refused to show my face,
In that God-forsaken place,
But with time saw forgiveness as best.

Things happen for a reason,
Now give me something to believe in,
So that I can continue the quest.

No tears where I bled,
And plenty of road up ahead,
The experience is what makes it a win.

The journey is who we are,
It can take us near or far,
Making us the best that we have ever been.


Scheme AAB CCB DDE BBE FDG XXG HHI DFI JJF BXD
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11111101 0010110010 101010100 01110100 10101010 111110010 10100010 1001011101 10100010 1111010 110101111 10101110 01101010 1101100111 1110111 1111111 101001101 1011111 0110101 111101011 1101010 111101010 111101001 11111 01011101 00100111101 0101111 1111111 10101111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 950
Words 222
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

A positive and motivational workplace is important for an employee with developmental expectations. If those surroundings are not available, the employee will go somewhere where they are available.

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Written on February 17, 2024

Submitted by JoseCanUC on March 10, 2024

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Joe McLaughlin

Raised on a small farm outside of a small town in Texas, I was no stranger to work. It is this work ethic that has propelled my professional success but there is this other side of me. The side that deeply thinks about things. The side with an imagination and a desire to use my hands for more than just brute physical labor. more…

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