Analysis of Castles by the Sea



A castle made of sand
stands tall against
the waves,  
safe behind
the line we drew
to catch the rising tide.

We watch the sea pour in
to reach the mark
we've made,
as memories
and time absorb
like water into sand.

And when the final grain
has fallen on
my time,
and empty is
the hourglass
behind the fragile line,

the setting sun will hum
a lullaby
you've heard
from moons ago,
awaiting still
a harmony not written.

And may this melody
be known when I
am gone,
if just a whispered
memory,
a breath in morning wind.

Take with you our time,
and take it down
the line,
where castles fall
and rise again
to greet the coming tides.

Each step that marks the past
and those I've yet
to take-
the broken, bent,
the stayed or strayed-
all lines lead back to you.

Brave the shoreline,
knowing
where the tides
have carried me.

I'll meet you where
the circle ends,
and we
begin again.


Scheme AXXBCX XXDXXA EFGXXH XIJXXX KIFJKB GXHXEL XXXXDC HXLK XXKE
Poetic Form
Metre 010111 1101 01 101 0111 110101 110110 1101 11 1100 0101 110011 010101 1101 11 0101 010 010101 010111 010 11 1101 0101 0100110 011100 1111 11 11010 100 010101 111101 0111 01 1101 0101 110101 111101 0111 11 0101 0111 111111 101 10 101 1101 1111 0101 01 0101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 883
Words 196
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 4, 4
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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For my daughters

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Submitted by JessicaWheeler on September 23, 2024

Modified by JessicaWheeler on September 23, 2024

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Jessica Wheeler

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Jessica Wheeler is a writer and poet from Branford, Connecticut, where she resides with her husband and two young daughters. Her creative journey began at a young age, with a strong foundation in music and performing arts. Today, Jessica is an active poet on numerous platforms. Her work has been published in several poetry anthologies and on websites dedicated to the complexities of loss and grief. more…

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