Analysis of Freedom is Waiting in Love



At the rising of the sun
I will hold your hand in mine.
Your soul will be carried through
the pleasantries of time.

If you understand the beauty
sweet birds do sing,
you will smile at the happiness
to you, I will bring.

As we hold our hands together
and look to the sky
clouds will talk,
the sun will smile,
the rain will stop.

An open field of nature -
where you want to be.
I will make for you.
All the dreams too distant
and all the pain to near...
Look in my eyes,
hold your heart,
there is nothing to fear.

And then at the setting of the sun,
I will hold your hand in mine.
Your soul has carried
through the pleasantries of time.


Scheme aBcd efxf gxxxx gecxhxxh aBxd
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 1111101 1111101 010011 1101010 1111 11110100 11111 111101010 01101 111 0111 0111 1101110 11111 11111 101110 010111 1011 111 111011 011010101 1111101 11110 1010011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 641
Words 150
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 8, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This poem is about a union journey between two people where they learn to trust, connect, forgive, and evolve. It's written in a cyclical nature around a 24-hour day.

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Written on January 10, 1994

Submitted by nicoleb.69140 on January 04, 2025

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Nicole Danielle Bowen

For as early as I can remember, my goal was to fulfill my inner child's spiritual needs. I like to assist in atoning the mind, body, and soul to make peace and find true self-love. I have been a member of the overall Poetry.com community for over 25 years and am so proud that it is going strong. I love to help others find peace within and eliminate the negative energy they battle with. I see who people are on the inside. I can add a gentle and personal compliment about the signs two people show together. I can also help guide the mind and soul through decision-making/problem-solving and heart-felt processes. I like to cover the whole, well-rounded aspect of life; while focusing on any particular area of concern as well. I am here for what is needed in best interest and does no harm. I have a Bachelor's degree in Liberal Studies with a minor in Psychology. I have a Master's degree in Public/Global Health. I am a Certified Crisis Counselor with a Dr. of Divinity & Dr. of Metaphysics as an Ordained Minister. I am here to help and assist in whatever serves the best interests and does no harm. I am open to all religions and denominations. I do not judge anyone or any circumstance. I believe that we love who we love. I observe and I speak offer constructive feedback as appropriate. I ask thought-provoking questions, if applicable. I respect and value decisions and would like to honor traditions and beliefs. I have been to over 17 countries. I am from the US. I like to travel, as well as, remain in my community. Connecting with people and connecting people warms my heart! more…

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