Analysis of incubus - succubus 



As I look and I see the snakes!
They fallow me reminding me…

“You will fail boy”
I continue to fall, hurt mentally.

“You will die for chasing what you love”
I see my life flash by remembering so little.

My past is a blur,
It continues to stir.

Day by day they circle above.
Taunting me, scaring me.

“You are no good”
I think I’ll never measure up.

“you are a disgrace”
I doubt I’ll even measure up to anything good

Cacodemon! Why won’t you leave?
Abaddon! Why do you haunt me?

I am trapped inside,
Going mad inside.

Oh, Angle of the Abyss…
My freedom I now miss.


Scheme XA XA BX CC BA DX XD XA EE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 11101101 1110101 1111 1010111100 111110111 1111110100110 11101 101011 11111001 101101 1111 11110101 11001 111101011101 11111 111111 11101 10101 1101001 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 569
Words 110
Sentences 13
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by Bluedelta2803 on May 04, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Skyler Dakaasin Boeve

Skyler is a new age poet with an old style twist. She Started writing for fun in 7th grade But didn't start posting her work until late 2020. Her poems speak of her heart but some are made for the reader to think on. more…

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