Primal Urge



Last night as I lay sleeping,
I travelled to a far off land.
I saw us both walking,
In a meadow hand in hand.

As I dreamt,
I held you tightly.
Your breathe upon me,
Caressing me lightly.

An urge so ancient,
Primal feelings from within,
Souls reunited,
Lovers without sin.

I grasped upon the truth,
And it was with dismay,
That I could only have this wish,
When I slept another day.
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Submitted by gregwen on June 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB XCCC XDXD XEXE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 367
Words 73
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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