Tick Tock



I'm a clock with no face,
Hands moving with time.
The pressure is rising
With each hourly chime.

A clock with no eyes
To see what lies ahead.
No way to ensure safety,
No end to my dread

A clock with no feelings
No heartbeat, no breath.
A clock with no conscience,
No fear of death.

What would happen
To the clock with no face
If the batteries died ?
Would they just be replaced ?

Time can be changed
Forward and back.
But not with this clock,
That something it lacks.

Time will go on
With each tickety-tock,
And the clock with no face
is still just a clock.

About this poem

I wrote this when I was going through a time when I felt empty and it seemed it would never end

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Written on July 30, 2022

Submitted by lissanneb on July 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB XCXC XDXD XAXX XXEX XEAE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 569
Words 129
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • EvanYt1
    Time goes on, no matter what and how we feel
    LikeReply6 days ago

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