working out my life was your wrong advice
they got two towers attacked
so easily of
of course I wasn't allowed to work on
a tower attack
when two was yet of
of course I am not allowed to work in life
the world became evil killing me from my mothers house
and a future wife
no thanks for working in secret
and operating without me
blanked my mind
and sent me out
into a world of money with no power
except to cast me out
they all went to London on my dime wasn't allowed to go
and Isis came out
a steal of a deal show
whats next to get killed
and against my own family to fullfill
never heard of such a party of incompetence
all against my family with me
you gave your heads to Isis
knell to more enemys
should have worked with me
I am left alone
yet Christ knew me
hows that take me over going
feel healthy wealthy and wise
or did you put an unhealthy spit on me
should have let me work
to save you some hurt
my6 dream wasn't yours
you shore know how to
let evil men score
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Written on December 17, 2022
Submitted by xspert on December 18, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Scheme | ABCDBEFEGHIJKJLJLMNOHPFHQHRSHTUVWY |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 933 |
Words | 194 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 34 |
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