My Immortal Love



My skin craves your touch
I scratch it raw
I would rend the flesh from my bone
Before I would forget you
My immortal love
Exposing blood and bone
I wait for you
In the dirt I'll be
Waiting patiently
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Written on January 11, 2023

Submitted by hilarysaurusrex on January 11, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDECDFF
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 198
Words 40
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

Hilary Uhl

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  • alanswansea18
    This poem is exactly what I'm looking for. I don't need the fancy words I want the feeling and that's all. Great job keeping up.
    LikeReply10 months ago

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