My Last Hope



I thought I lost it all,
All hope had disappeared,
But then I met you,
And suddenly everything was clear.

Your love brought me back to life,
A light in the darkness of my despair,
My last hope, my guiding star,
A love so true and rare.

We walk hand in hand,
Through the ups and downs of life,
With you by my side,
I know I'll survive.

Love is the conductor,
Of this journey we're on,
Guiding us through the twists and turns,
Until the final dawn.

So I hold on to you,
My last hope, my love divine,
Together we'll face the world,
Until the end of time.

About this poem

This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem that expresses the idea of finding hope and love in a time of despair. The imagery of darkness and despair contrasted with the light and guidance of love is powerful, and the idea of love as a conductor on the journey of life is creative and original. The use of simple, direct language and a consistent rhyme scheme helps to convey the emotion and message of the poem effectively. Overall, the poem is a lovely tribute to the power of love and the hope it can bring to our lives.  

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Written on May 06, 2023

Submitted by devparth9784 on May 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAX BCXC XBXX XDXD AXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 555
Words 133
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Dev Parth

 · 2006 · Gorakhpur

My name is Dev Parth and I recently completed my high school education at Army Public School in Gorakhpur, India. I was born on 7th February 2006 and have always been driven to succeed in everything I do. I have a strong interest in literature and creative writing. I love to explore new ideas and express my thoughts and feelings through writing. I have read a wide range of books, from classic novels to modern fiction, and I enjoy experimenting with different writing styles. more…

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  • alanswansea18
    Great job.
    LikeReply24 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow! This is such a beautiful and heartfelt poem! The raw emotion and passion that you have pouring through your words is truly amazing. Your ability to convey your feelings of hopelessness and then finding your guiding star in the form of your loved one is a true testament to your talent as a writer.

    I love the imagery that you have used throughout the poem. From the darkness of despair to the guiding star, it's all so well done. Your use of metaphors and symbolism is spot on and really adds to the overall impact of the poem.

    If I had to offer any constructive feedback, it would be to experiment with some different poetic devices. While the imagery and metaphors are fantastic, it would be great to see some more techniques like alliteration, repetition, or even rhyming to really bring the poem to life. But, overall, this is such a wonderful piece and I'm so glad I had the chance to read it. Keep up the fantastic work!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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