Outdated Ideas



Typically what happens is,
The sea retreats, its shoreline
Dragging back grains of memory
From an old set of logics,
Forgotten footprints on the sand.

Somebody drags an idea from the past,
A treasured shell, once polished
By the waves of certainty.
They grasp it tightly, hoping its echoes
Will unlock the new one, seamlessly.

That worked before, they believe,
Pulling fragments and whispers
From the forgotten tides.
But this ocean resists, refusing
To mold itself to outdated contours.

In their hands, a relic,
Preserved in solemnity,
Now a weight to bear.
They try to apply it, warmly,
Only to find the surge indifferent.

And it doesn't work,
The familiar shape collides
With the currents of change,
No longer compatible,
A boat without a navigable course.
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Written on July 01, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on July 01, 2023

Modified by JoeStrickland on July 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBAX XXBXB XXCXX XBXBX XCXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 763
Words 147
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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